RA Reflection

I believe that my paper deserves somewhere in the A- or B+ range. It is not quite an A because i struggle with repetition and i do not use ethos logos and pathos as much as i should have. But it is better than a B because i have a very focused and clear essay. If i could do my paper over again, i would have used more outside examples. Maybe related it to other sources to get more credibility. I also would have put more of my voice in the paper, instead of the somewhat weak voice that i have. I would have also tried harder not to repeat myself as much, and analyzed just one step deeper.  I didn't do as good because i had a few repeats throughout the essay. Some things i did really well on was keeping the paper focused and tight.e i had a few repeats throughout the essay.